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westfam11
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# Posted: 20 Oct 2009 16:32
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I have a lens that I would like opinions and/or criticism on.
http://www.squidoo.com/authentic-nfl-football-jerseys
Thanks in advance. I really do appreciate any help with what to do with my lens. I am still new to squidoo and am trying to make the changes that are suggested if I am able to.
Thanks again,
Becky
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examiner
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# Posted: 21 Oct 2009 02:14
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Although I do not follow NFL, but I did like your lens. Informative and not-too-pushy presell.
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Jean LA
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# Posted: 23 Oct 2009 06:59
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It's a great lens. I think it will be more beautiful if you place blackbox or talk bubble that gives the highlight of your lens.
Also, the comments module is good if you are asking a question, in doing this you can indulge more comments from people who are answering your question in there.
Hope that helps.
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