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inspire63
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Joined: 4 Sep 2006
Posts: 2
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# Posted: 4 Sep 2006 20:45
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Hello all!
I have just recorded a special song for those of us who work from home. Could you please take a listen and give me some feedback. You will find the song at the site listed below.
A feedback form is there as well.
The song is located at the following website:
http://www.workfromhomeonline.info/feedback.htm
Thanks in advance for all of your help
dale : )
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cyberchick
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Joined: 15 Sep 2006
Posts: 46
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# Posted: 16 Sep 2006 04:36
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Hi Dale,
I listened to your song but admit I got turned off about half way through. I like the lyrics, excepth the "god' content, as this makes it too gospely for my liking. Now, please understand that I'm not against gospel, but I like the upbeat versions more. Maybe you can ad a bit of umph to your next song.
None theless, you did very well as the "god" thing is simply my opinion and others will love it I'm sure.
Bye the way, I really love the song "one vision one world" by DJ Bobo, as it applies to our industry and played in a huge audience, it really gets you dancing and clapping away 
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getagrip
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Joined: 20 Feb 2006
Posts: 1265
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# Posted: 4 Oct 2006 01:02
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Given the fact that I'm a Christian, I don't mind the "God" theme, but I think you need to go after your target audience with this kind of appeal - maybe some Christian message boards or something like that. Its not a bad message (in the song), but I think you will have to have an effective website in the background - if you have the right website, the music factor won't play that big of a roll - but again, you have to target it toward the right audience.
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