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yadvinder_singh
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#1 · Posted: 18 Jul 2010 14:53
Words matter. The words you use in advertising tell others a lot about you. I came across this on an mlm forum today:
Why Pay $Hundreds or even Thousands$ to Join The Latest Biz Opportunity When Measly $25 is All It Takes To Rake In Tens Of Thousands of Dollars Each and Every Month on Auto-Pilot? See what I mean: [he has link to his pitch page]
"I have no urge to live now"
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talfighel
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#2 · Posted: 19 Jul 2010 10:34
I don't think that this is a bad ad at all. It captures the person's attention. It has a lot of hype but I think he may do well by getting people to sign up.
Tal
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A8ch
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#3 · Posted: 19 Jul 2010 12:06
yadvinder_singh: "I have no urge to live now"
Don't be so hard on yourself! 
If you judge an ad only by its aesthetics, grammar, syntax or presentation, you'll discover that "good", "better", "best", "bad", "worse" or "worst" are all subjective labels. The true value of an ad isn't determined by how politically or grammatically correct it is, but by its ability to convert. In the final analysis it's about results not elegance of presentation.
Hermas
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FreeCashMan
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#4 · Posted: 19 Jul 2010 12:55
I was at a lost as to how it was the worst ad, myself. Typos don't count. As noted, if the ad gets a person to click, it has done its job. Then the website needs to complete the next part.
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mountainmom5
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#5 · Posted: 20 Jul 2010 09:46
I like that ad. It hits a spot for people like me who are so tired of politically correct everything as we never fit into that category anyways. lol
Maybe it's because we are back bush folk...
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happywife
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#6 · Posted: 23 Jul 2010 01:19
Eww Yuck!
I don't like it. But I just happen to not like ads that make false promises and mislead people so blatantly. It's one of my little pet peeves, I guess.
For only $25 you'll be raking in tens of thousands per month on autopilot?
Uh huh....
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mountainmom5
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#7 · Posted: 23 Jul 2010 08:22
happywife: I don't like it. But I just happen to not like ads that make false promises and mislead people so blatantly. It's one of my little pet peeves, I guess.
good point.
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camaguay
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#8 · Posted: 23 Jul 2010 22:12
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