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daellis99
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#1 · Posted: 29 Apr 2009 15:18 · Edited by: daellis99
Hey guys this is my first Lens. Can you check it out and give me some advice!
I am not trying to promote just want to figure out how to make it better.
BTW...it is in my Sig block
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#2 · Posted: 29 Apr 2009 15:39
Hi Randolph,
I starred and favorited your lens. I'm the electric guitar avatar. I also joined your fanclub.
I think the lens is good as is. Nice job.
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daellis99
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#3 · Posted: 29 Apr 2009 15:40
Thanks man. I appreciate it!
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redsadie
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#4 · Posted: 29 Apr 2009 18:04
Newbie Shield: Hi Randolph, I starred and favorited your lens. I'm the electric guitar avatar. I also joined your fanclub. I think the lens is good as is. Nice job.
Yep, me too  although I am not the electric guitar, I'm the cool lady avatar
Nicely done.
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prom0406
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#5 · Posted: 29 Apr 2009 18:37
Nice lens! I think the graphics you have added is a very nice touch. One thing I noticed though is that there are a few misspelled words.
great job!
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cherie27
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#6 · Posted: 29 Apr 2009 23:14
Nice squidoo len.
Your first squidoo len is better than my first one. It look more professional.
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mountainmom5
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#7 · Posted: 30 Apr 2009 02:11
redsadie: Newbie Shield: Hi Randolph, I starred and favorited your lens. I'm the electric guitar avatar. I also joined your fanclub. I think the lens is good as is. Nice job. Yep, me too although I am not the electric guitar, I'm the cool lady avatar
You will find me there,too - I am just , well, just me in the little picture. 
But yes, your lens is way better than any of my first ones!
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A8ch
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#8 · Posted: 30 Apr 2009 14:51
Hey Randolph!
You did a stellar job on your first lens.
I rated, commented and favorited it.
Hermas
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gridellas
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#9 · Posted: 30 Apr 2009 17:49
WHOA that was your first? Man you did blow mine first one out of the water also. LOL Great Job on your lens, can't wait to see more.
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TshirtFrank
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#10 · Posted: 30 Apr 2009 19:38 · Edited by: TshirtFrank
Great Job! Your lens looks great I would'nt change anything! The only thing that I would say is make sure that it is well tagged. I would use at least 10 to 15 tags on each lens. I am not sure if you have done this but it is a big help.
Keep up the good work!
TSF
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beckernpeeksmom
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#11 · Posted: 1 May 2009 13:52
That is an Excellent first lens, Congrats to you!
I left a blurb and rated it also, it is mark-my-words.
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daellis99
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#12 · Posted: 1 May 2009 17:36
Thanks for visiting my page as well as the comments guys. I really appreciate it. If I can return the favor i certainly will!
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jaesun16
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#13 · Posted: 8 May 2009 20:50
That's good lens also good site!
I am member of 10K matrix also.!~
It is very good business to start!!
I think you have good reputation on your lens
Good luck~
Happy day~^^
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