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countrygirl
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#1 · Posted: 28 May 2009 09:20
Just learning squidoo, but I really like it. Got my first lens going pretty good, just want some feedback as to how I can improve it. I am working on 2 more lenses now. Is there such a thing as a squidoo addict? lol
The link to my first lens is in the signature. Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks!
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weblearner
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#2 · Posted: 28 May 2009 10:40
hi ntrygirl
your link is not working properly.
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mountainmom5
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#3 · Posted: 28 May 2009 11:33
countrygirl: Is there such a thing as a squidoo addict?
haha - yup!
oops - your link is not working right. Might want to check that out.
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A8ch
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#4 · Posted: 28 May 2009 14:30 · Edited by: A8ch
countrygirl: I think I might become a squidoo addict!
CountryGirl, the link to your Squidoo page seems to be missing the "t" in extra. You'll need to correct that.
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countrygirl
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#5 · Posted: 28 May 2009 14:38
Sorry! Blonde moment, i guess! lol
It should be working now. Thanks!
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countrygirl
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#6 · Posted: 29 May 2009 15:47
Still trying to improve this lens. I checked the "health" stats & got the following: lens title & intro title should pertain to the contents of the lens, and the primary tags doesnt match the contents.
I think it does. Can anyone explain this to me?
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A8ch
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#7 · Posted: 29 May 2009 19:45 · Edited by: A8ch
countrygirl: Still trying to improve this lens. I checked the "health" stats & got the following: lens title & intro title should pertain to the contents of the lens, and the primary tags doesnt match the contents. I think it does. Can anyone explain this to me?
I think it does too! But... let's take a closer look.
Your primary tag reads: "Work At Home" and that exact phrase does not appear anywhere on your lens. So, change the primary tag to "Work From Home" and see if that makes a difference.
We humans understand the two phrases mean the same thing, but the computer program is probably interpreting them as different expressions with different meanings. Technology! 
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countrygirl
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#8 · Posted: 31 May 2009 19:44
Thanks for your help. It is very much appreciated!
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#9 · Posted: 1 Jun 2009 22:23
Hi CountryGirl,
The lens in your sig looks great as is.
I also looked at your other lens. That's coming along nicely - just flesh it out a bit.
I interacted with both and joined your fanclub. I'm the electric guitar avatar.
Nice work!
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