Can I get your opinion on my Lens?

Discussion in 'Squidoo' started by metalfrog, Nov 2, 2009.

  1. metalfrog

    metalfrog New Member

    I have been using squidoo for a week now. I first heard of it on this forum. So I need every suggestion and critique you can give me. Thanks!

    http://www.squidoo.com/right-insurance-for-me
     
  2. mountainmom5

    mountainmom5 Gold Member

    Hi Juliet!

    Looks like you are having fun with Squidoo...It is awesome that you can build lenses on topics that you have a lot of knowledge on... I have built some lenses on topics that I knew next to nothing about and believe me, it is much easier to write on something I know about!

    I favorited and rated it and here are a few tips for you.

    Make sure your keyword phrase for the lens - like right insurance for me is in several key places such as Title - Headlines - within the first couple sentences of the intro module - and also in the bio part...

    I personally would make the lenses more informative and add more text modules etc...

    Hope that helps - but you are doing a great job for your first week at it. If you have the finances to do so - the OWM will also help you a lot with Squidoo.
     
  3. metalfrog

    metalfrog New Member

    Yeah I had the Auto Article, The Renters Article and the Life Article all on that page at first. But then it seemed like it was getting long and some people on squidoo said to make separate lens for each one and make the main page more of a table of contents. So I did that, but since they have not given me any opinion on the new format. So thanks for the suggestions.
     
  4. destani

    destani New Member

    Hi, I looked at your squidoo page and I think you did a great job for your first lens. As you create more lenses it will become more comfortable and you will be able to add more content. Don't worry about hitting the ball out of the ballpark the first time just keep swinging. Eventually you will hit a home run. [​IMG] Best wishes!
     

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