Can you check out my lens please?

Discussion in 'Squidoo' started by westfam11, Oct 20, 2009.

  1. westfam11

    westfam11 Member

    I have a lens that I would like opinions and/or criticism on.

    Thanks in advance. I really do appreciate any help with what to do with my lens. I am still new to squidoo and am trying to make the changes that are suggested if I am able to.

    Thanks again,
  2. examiner

    examiner New Member

    Although I do not follow NFL, but I did like your lens. Informative and not-too-pushy presell.
  3. Jean LA

    Jean LA New Member

    It's a great lens. I think it will be more beautiful if you place blackbox or talk bubble that gives the highlight of your lens.

    Also, the comments module is good if you are asking a question, in doing this you can indulge more comments from people who are answering your question in there.

    Hope that helps.

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