Help me improve

Discussion in 'Squidoo' started by Desigirl, Jan 3, 2009.

  1. Desigirl

    Desigirl New Member

    Hello Everbody...

    I a new to squidooo...I am just addicted to it now..Can u guys help me out to improve my lens..Your comments good/bad wil help me ...

    Thanks for ur time
     
  2. chrisbag

    chrisbag New Member

    Hi

    They look real good to me, cant see anything that needs improvement, but im new to squidoo myself too, so still learning
     
  3. Sonni

    Sonni New Member

    I'm sure our forever faithful NS will come to the rescue here, he's the Squidoo Master... Yoo Hoo NS
    Sonni
     
  4. Desigirl

    Desigirl New Member

    Hey thanks for your replies [​IMG]
     
  5. Newbie Shield

    Newbie Shield Gold Member

    Hi Desigirl,

    All of your lenses look good. It seems you know what you are doing. One tip is to add one or two text modules in between the money modules at the end to break up the stores a bit and add a little more information. Nice job.

    ~Newbie Shield~
     
  6. Desigirl

    Desigirl New Member

    Thanks a lot. I will surely take ur advice..will find some good topic...thanks for visiting my lens[​IMG]
     
  7. chrisbag

    chrisbag New Member

    Newbie Shield,

    I was wondering if you wouldnt mind checking mine out for me, if you get some time, i would be real grateful. You can get to two of them using the 2nd and 3rd links below.

    Thanks
    Chrissy
     
  8. Newbie Shield

    Newbie Shield Gold Member

    chrisbag: I was wondering if you wouldnt mind checking mine out for me, if you get some time, i would be real grateful. You can get to two of them using the 2nd and 3rd links below.

    Hi Chrissy,

    It looks like I have already visited one lens and joined your fan club earlier. I'm the electric guitar avatar.

    The second time around I visited all five of your lenses and they look good. I rated and favorited them.

    One doesn't have a guestbook yet. I suggest you add one. Interactivity helps with rank.

    On one the guestbook is near the middle. I suggest that you drop it to the bottom as that is where visitors look for it and are more likely to find it and sign it.

    Minor adjustments otherwise your lenses look good. Nice job.

    ~Newbie Shield~
     
  9. businessonapage

    businessonapage New Member

    Desigirl you said: Your comments good/bad wil help me ...

    I like your Coolgoa lens and your use of modules. This is the first time I've seen how to use Orbitz - Only noticed one typo on your video header, belive should be believe. Keep up the good lens writing.
     

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