I am working on preparing a mass email to send out to businesses and residential customers. I am working for North American Power, signing people up and helping them save on their electric. I also sign them up to become reps(which is essentially just a customer who refers people) I need to make sure I am including both of this information in the body of the email, but I don't want to come off too pushy or provide too much information. Of course, I don't want to provide too little information either. Here is what I am thinking: My name is Anthony Contino, and I am an Independent Representative for North American power. I work to help residential and commercial electric users save money on their utility bills, while also offering the chance to make money through referrals. The process is free, simple, and only takes a few minutes to switch your energy supplier in order to receive the reduced electric rate. You could be saving up to 20% each month from your utility bill. To learn more about the rates offered in your area, please visit (link to main site with rates) If you are also interested in learning solely about the referral opportunity, you can go straight there by visiting(link to business oriented site) North American Power is also a company which gives back to the community. For each customer, North American Power will donate their own money to a charity of your choice. Thank you. If you have any questions, please feel free to email me back or give me a call at the number below. (Contact Information) How does this look?