My 4th lense

Discussion in 'Squidoo' started by tandre, Dec 23, 2009.

  1. tandre

    tandre New Member

    Hello,

    Please check out my new lense. Is it too long and content heavy? I tired to put some personal stories showing how I relate to the material but maybe not enough?

    http://www.squidoo.com/treatexcessivesweating
     
  2. mountainmom5

    mountainmom5 Gold Member

    I favorited and rated it. [​IMG]

    It is very informative but you might want to break it up a bit more with things like bullet points, such as...if you use the following html , it will create bullets which are a nice way to break things up.


    Tricyclic antidepressants such as Pamelor and Norpramin
    SSRI antidepressants such as Prozac and Paxil
    Medicines for dry mouth such as Salagen
    Some supplements such as zinc-based cold remedies

    Also if you use bold and italics, here and there, it will also help the skim reader folks like myself and maybe add a few more links to "get the click".... see how the bold and italics breaks it all up??

    Just a few tips. Merry Christmas![​IMG]
     
  3. tandre

    tandre New Member

    Thank you I have been wanting to know how to do bullet points on these lenses and this will help as I need a basic HTML course!
     
  4. mountainmom5

    mountainmom5 Gold Member

    I use Newbie Shields " Squidoo how-to" lens a lot for html stuff - it is at squidoo.com/how-to-lens

    Have fun![​IMG]
     
  5. treevee

    treevee Member

    tandre: Thank you I have been wanting to know how to do bullet points on these lenses and this will help as I need a basic HTML course!
    HTML is that nagging itch I can't seem to scratch -- I need a course, too! So, I cheat by copying and pasting. [​IMG]

    Bullet points, fonts, colors, and all those cool implements -- I have these in my fav's so 2 days after I build my lenses I go back and tweak them (and then ping them for my buddy, Google) -->

    http://www.squidoo.com/basichtml
    http://www.squidoo.com/advancedhtml
    http://www.squidoo.com/colorhtml
    http://www.squidoo.com/morecsstricks

    Hope these help!
     
  6. mountainmom5

    mountainmom5 Gold Member

    Awesome treevee! I'll have to add those lenses to my stash.[​IMG]

    Between the One Week Marketing and the html tips, there is no reason our Squidoo lenses shouldn't march straight to the top.[​IMG]
     
  7. talfighel

    talfighel Silver Member

    Wow, you did a great job with your lance.

    Looks like you are good at this.

    Way to go.

    Tal
     

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