My first Squidoo Lens

Discussion in 'Squidoo' started by daellis99, Apr 29, 2009.

  1. daellis99

    daellis99 New Member

    Hey guys this is my first Lens. Can you check it out and give me some advice!

    I am not trying to promote just want to figure out how to make it better.

    BTW...it is in my Sig block
     
  2. Newbie Shield

    Newbie Shield Gold Member

    Hi Randolph,

    I starred and favorited your lens. I'm the electric guitar avatar. I also joined your fanclub.

    I think the lens is good as is. Nice job.

    ~Newbie Shield~
     
  3. daellis99

    daellis99 New Member

    Thanks man. I appreciate it!
     
  4. redsadie

    redsadie New Member

    Newbie Shield: Hi Randolph,

    I starred and favorited your lens. I'm the electric guitar avatar. I also joined your fanclub.

    I think the lens is good as is. Nice job.
    Yep, me too [​IMG] although I am not the electric guitar, I'm the cool lady avatar [​IMG]

    Nicely done.
     
  5. prom0406

    prom0406 New Member

    Nice lens! I think the graphics you have added is a very nice touch. One thing I noticed though is that there are a few misspelled words.
    great job!
     
  6. cherie27

    cherie27 New Member

    Nice squidoo len.

    Your first squidoo len is better than my first one. It look more professional.
     
  7. mountainmom5

    mountainmom5 Gold Member

    redsadie: Newbie Shield:
    Hi Randolph,

    I starred and favorited your lens. I'm the electric guitar avatar. I also joined your fanclub.

    I think the lens is good as is. Nice job.
    Yep, me too although I am not the electric guitar, I'm the cool lady avatar
    You will find me there,too - I am just , well, just me in the little picture. [​IMG]

    But yes, your lens is way better than any of my first ones!
     
  8. A8ch

    A8ch Gold Member

    Hey Randolph!

    You did a stellar job on your first lens.
    I rated, commented and favorited it.

    Hermas
     
  9. gridellas

    gridellas New Member

    WHOA that was your first? Man you did blow mine first one out of the water also. LOL Great Job on your lens, can't wait to see more. [​IMG]
     
  10. TshirtFrank

    TshirtFrank New Member

    Great Job! Your lens looks great I would'nt change anything! The only thing that I would say is make sure that it is well tagged. I would use at least 10 to 15 tags on each lens. I am not sure if you have done this but it is a big help.

    Keep up the good work!

    TSF
     
  11. beckernpeeksmom

    beckernpeeksmom New Member

    That is an Excellent first lens, Congrats to you!
    I left a blurb and rated it also, it is mark-my-words.
     
  12. daellis99

    daellis99 New Member

    Thanks for visiting my page as well as the comments guys. I really appreciate it. If I can return the favor i certainly will!
     
  13. jaesun16

    jaesun16 New Member

    That's good lens also good site!

    I am member of 10K matrix also.!~

    It is very good business to start!!

    I think you have good reputation on your lens

    Good luck~


    Happy day~^^[​IMG]
     

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