Okay...Here is my First Lens

Discussion in 'Squidoo' started by tygersclaw, May 30, 2009.

  1. tygersclaw

    tygersclaw New Member

    I did this without knowing what I am doing, but it IS my first one and I am sure I can get better.

    What do you think?

  2. jaesun16

    jaesun16 New Member

    Hi, I like it,

    It's good lens for first one!

    I had first lens couple months ago, It wasn't as good as yours

    Keep working hard, and make another one !~

    Good luck to your business

    Happy day~^^[​IMG]
  3. Newbie Shield

    Newbie Shield Gold Member

    Hi TygersClaw,

    Nice first lens - it looks good.

    I interacted on your lens and joined your fanclub.

    You might consider breaking up those paragraphs into several separate, focused modules complete with relevant titles for each module. Adding a few images every few paragraphs will also help to break up the paragraphs.

    ~Newbie Shield~
  4. tygersclaw

    tygersclaw New Member

    Thanks everyone for your compliments.

    My plan is to dwelve further into each topic I presented and as such will show how Music, Hosting, Marketing & MONEY are all truly connected.

    However, unfortunately, days off are over for now and back to the 10 hour a day grind for the next 4 days.

    But I do hope to get something published each day. Somehow.
  5. TshirtFrank

    TshirtFrank New Member

    Hi tygersclaw,

    Your first lens looks good.

    I rated it and commented on it. Newbie shield hit it right on the head. I think your lens would be even better if you split up the content into a couple more modules and maybe a pic or two.

    You are well on your way!

  6. tygersclaw

    tygersclaw New Member

    Just to update.

    I keep adding at least 1 new article a day, and now, in the Work At Home category, my lens ranks at #119!!!

    Seems the key to success here is, write daily, make sure what you write about has good information, and keep working at it.

    Thanks to those who have visited and rated my lens as well. I appreciate it.
  7. simplyg

    simplyg New Member

    Your lens has so much information. I'm impressed!

    I was wondering if you think it's better to have one long and information packed lens or a number of shorter lenses. I just started my second lens, but part of me thinks I should just keep working on the first one. It's nowhere near as long as yours and maybe I'm doing a disservice to readers by not giving them more.

    Any thoughts? Also, if I should have started a new thread to ask this question, let me know. I'm new to the forum and still learning.


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