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Desigirl
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Joined: 3 Jan 2009
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# Posted: 4 Jan 2009 02:51
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Hello Everbody...
I a new to squidooo...I am just addicted to it now..Can u guys help me out to improve my lens..Your comments good/bad wil help me ...
Thanks for ur time
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chrisbag
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# Posted: 4 Jan 2009 11:12
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Hi
They look real good to me, cant see anything that needs improvement, but im new to squidoo myself too, so still learning
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Sonni
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# Posted: 5 Jan 2009 00:30
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I'm sure our forever faithful NS will come to the rescue here, he's the Squidoo Master... Yoo Hoo NS
Sonni
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Desigirl
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# Posted: 5 Jan 2009 04:52
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Hey thanks for your replies 
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Joined: 22 Sep 2007
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# Posted: 5 Jan 2009 09:36
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Hi Desigirl,
All of your lenses look good. It seems you know what you are doing. One tip is to add one or two text modules in between the money modules at the end to break up the stores a bit and add a little more information. Nice job.
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Desigirl
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# Posted: 6 Jan 2009 00:49
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Thanks a lot. I will surely take ur advice..will find some good topic...thanks for visiting my lens
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chrisbag
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# Posted: 9 Jan 2009 07:46
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Newbie Shield,
I was wondering if you wouldnt mind checking mine out for me, if you get some time, i would be real grateful. You can get to two of them using the 2nd and 3rd links below.
Thanks
Chrissy
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# Posted: 9 Jan 2009 09:08
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chrisbag: I was wondering if you wouldnt mind checking mine out for me, if you get some time, i would be real grateful. You can get to two of them using the 2nd and 3rd links below.
Hi Chrissy,
It looks like I have already visited one lens and joined your fan club earlier. I'm the electric guitar avatar.
The second time around I visited all five of your lenses and they look good. I rated and favorited them.
One doesn't have a guestbook yet. I suggest you add one. Interactivity helps with rank.
On one the guestbook is near the middle. I suggest that you drop it to the bottom as that is where visitors look for it and are more likely to find it and sign it.
Minor adjustments otherwise your lenses look good. Nice job.
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businessonapage
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Joined: 31 Oct 2008
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# Posted: 14 Jan 2009 03:22
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Desigirl you said: Your comments good/bad wil help me ...
I like your Coolgoa lens and your use of modules. This is the first time I've seen how to use Orbitz - Only noticed one typo on your video header, belive should be believe. Keep up the good lens writing.
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