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Can you please look at my first lens?

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redsadie
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# Posted: 9 Mar 2009 12:33
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It should be in my signature

Thanks everyone! x

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Sonni
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# Posted: 9 Mar 2009 12:50
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I checked out your lens stars, favorite and comment you have a good start keep going.
Sonni

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redsadie
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# Posted: 9 Mar 2009 13:36
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Thanks Sonni

Any ideas on how I can improve it? I have been updating it since I posted here. x

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redsadie
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# Posted: 9 Mar 2009 16:48 · Edited by: redsadie
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Can anyone shed any light on why I have 4 squidoo lenses that are exactly the same when I have only atually made one?

I have the bug now! I'm in the process of making another one I did have a few snags when trying to create the one I have already, so what I've done with the second one is to write it out in Word, flesh it out and find pictures etc, then I can copy and paste into Squidoo when I feel the time is right I then have a copy of it if anything goes wrong!
x

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TshirtFrank
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# Posted: 9 Mar 2009 19:38
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Hi redsadie,

Your lens looks good so far! I favorited you and commented on your page as well.
Traffic is so important for your lens ranking and for the way that google indexes your listings. Be sure to update often and ping your lens as much as you can!

TSF

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# Posted: 9 Mar 2009 22:02
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Hi RedSadie,

Your lens is looking good so far.

A bit of advice: Next time you are in edit mode, be sure to hit the publish button so that it can get ranked and so that the general public will see it.

I would drop the guestbook down all the way to the bottom as that is where visitors look for it.

Be sure to change the module titles to include your keyword phrases.

Nice job so far,

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samueldarwin
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# Posted: 9 Mar 2009 22:12
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Looks nice. Change the steps name into their respective functionality name. Next edit your bio. Do some link building and you muct be good to go. All the best.

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mountainmom5
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# Posted: 10 Mar 2009 00:14
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Great job - I rated and favorited your lens...

You have gotten some great advice so far - I would add that some of the key places to have your keyword phrase in are..

1) Title
2)Bio
3)Within the first sentence or two of the introductory module
4)In anchor text
5)in as many of your module titles as you can...



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redsadie
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# Posted: 10 Mar 2009 05:58
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Thanks guys

I have recieved your blurb comments but it won't let me approve them. I'll wait a while and go back to try again.
x

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# Posted: 10 Mar 2009 10:42
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Hi RedSadie,

Looks like you must have hit the publish button because your lens is now ranked. You should now be able to approve comments.

Good that you dropped the guestbook module down to the bottom and put some keyword phrases in some of your module titles. You might consider giving the Amazon modules relevant titles.

Your lens is coming along nicely. Keep up the good work.

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redsadie
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# Posted: 10 Mar 2009 10:50
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Aw, thanks NS, I really appreciate the comments and feedback. What would you consider to be relevent titles? x

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